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oil painting of my son and nephew painted by me

Beachcombing

Clouds floating across the azure blue sky like sailing ships over serene sea on a sunny afternoon Two barefooted boys beachcomb the warm sandy beach leaving footprints behind Unaware that there is another world around them listening only to the resonant sonorousness sounds of the sea cold sea air rolling inland ruffled their hair Calm waves silently creep leaving a slight spume over the golden tanned sand then slowly drawing a breath, taking their footprints back into its turquoise depth The boys seem to take pleasure daydreaming of visionary fantasy of hopes scanning the sand for treasures that has washed up upon the shore Perhaps a treasure map in a bottle written long ago or a carved figure mounted on a pirate ship’s bow cocoon in the sand only shown when the waves roll back Soon the sun will draw it curtains close and the night will yawn a whiff of cool air exposing its sublime moon Two weary boys walk away from the beach leaving footprints behind carrying a handful of seashells and stories to tell
12/8/2016 The painting above the poem is an oil painting of my son and nephew painted by me, I call it, " Beachcombing".
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Date: 12/9/2016 3:40:00 PM
ohh, a fine story weaver you are, eve... i enjoyed this boyhood friendship.. huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/10/2016 9:19:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, your compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/9/2016 8:56:00 AM
"leaving footprints behind" Yes, Mrs Eve. We always leave footprints behind. Wonderful poetry!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/10/2016 9:20:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel, for your inspirational compliment. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/9/2016 8:52:00 AM
Eve, a special, beautiful poem about what is often a magical time. And WOW what a painting! Cheers, Doug.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/10/2016 9:21:00 PM
Thank you, Doug, for your inspirational compliment and the wow on my painting. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/8/2016 6:36:00 PM
this was a wonderful job you did creating the story of their walk along the beach. Fond times that all children have. Some kids are lucky to be raised by a beach!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/10/2016 9:22:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, always enjoyed going to the coast Hugs Eve
Date: 12/8/2016 1:40:00 PM
So wonderful and enchanting Eve. This was like watching a happy home movie and remembering those days. Nicely done.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/8/2016 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Chris, your inspirational words really makes me feel good. These were memories from long ago the young man in the blue is my son he was about 7 now his 33 times does fly to quickly.. Hugs Eve
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