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Beach Umbrellas

Beach Umbrellas - Exotic mushrooms erupting from sand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 1:30 PM
Perfect and perfectly executed SuZ. :)
Delaney Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 3:24 PM
Fun stretching the imagination, Linda Your’e good at these too. SuZ
Ray Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 6:50 PM
always with that clever touch....it is absolutely adorable....
Delaney Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 8:37 AM
Many thanks, Timray: I will send you a catch up email personally soon. Been a hectic few weeks here but all is well. Best, SuZ
Volumes Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 5:01 AM
Very clever Suz. Love it
Delaney Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thanks Wendy: Hope you are having fun Bantu- ing. SuZ
Richards Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:17 AM
A great example of the two-line verse call and response game. I can 'hear' it being played in a corn field in Africa as the workers bend to their tasks. Short and sweet:))
Delaney Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Thanks Suz: sent Soupmail
Rodrigues Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 5:36 PM
Wonderful!
Delaney Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:34 PM
Thanks Kim.
Anaya Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 3:52 PM
Stunning! You have made the Bantu a fav [poetry type] now, as well as faving yours, Suzanne.
Delaney Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Thankyou Anaya for you valued comment. Having a crazy week with company. So happy everyone is enjoying these wordplays. SuZ
Turner Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 3:41 PM
You seem to excel in these, SuZ.
Delaney Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:36 PM
Thanks so much, Daniel: Best, SuZ
Willason Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 2:22 PM
A clever image to entertain the imagination. Nice one.
Sands Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Great poem. Well done :)
Delaney Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Thanks Heidi
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 6:03 AM
- A good one ... :))) .. (I have to try to do one) - hugs
Delaney Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:31 PM
Thanks so much, Anne Lise. Hugs, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 5:55 AM
That is superb, Suz. You aced this Bantu.
Delaney Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 12:32 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay: Looking forward vey much to judging this contest. Best, SuZ
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