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Beach Umbrellas

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Beach Umbrellas - Exotic mushrooms erupting from sand

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/17/2023 1:30:00 PM

Perfect and perfectly executed SuZ. :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2023 3:24:00 PM

Fun stretching the imagination, Linda Your’e good at these too. SuZ

Timothy Ray

Date: 4/1/2023 6:50:00 PM

always with that clever touch....it is absolutely adorable....

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/2/2023 8:37:00 AM

Many thanks, Timray: I will send you a catch up email personally soon. Been a hectic few weeks here but all is well. Best, SuZ

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/29/2023 5:01:00 AM

Very clever Suz. Love it

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2023 12:33:00 PM

Thanks Wendy: Hope you are having fun Bantu- ing. SuZ

Suzette Richards

Date: 3/29/2023 12:17:00 AM

A great example of the two-line verse call and response game. I can 'hear' it being played in a corn field in Africa as the workers bend to their tasks. Short and sweet:))

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2023 12:33:00 PM

Thanks Suz: sent Soupmail

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/28/2023 5:36:00 PM

Wonderful!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2023 12:34:00 PM

Thanks Kim.

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/28/2023 3:52:00 PM

Stunning! You have made the Bantu a fav [poetry type] now, as well as faving yours, Suzanne.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/2/2023 8:36:00 AM

Thankyou Anaya for you valued comment. Having a crazy week with company. So happy everyone is enjoying these wordplays. SuZ

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/28/2023 3:41:00 PM

You seem to excel in these, SuZ.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2023 12:36:00 PM

Thanks so much, Daniel: Best, SuZ

Di11y Da11y

Date: 3/28/2023 2:24:00 PM

Wonderful! These are my new favourite thing!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2023 12:29:00 PM

Thanks DD: I am itching to read everyone’s but need to wait so I can do unbiased judging. Cheers, SuZ

Paul Willason

Date: 3/28/2023 2:22:00 PM

A clever image to entertain the imagination. Nice one.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/28/2023 12:23:00 PM

Great poem. Well done :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2023 12:30:00 PM

Thanks Heidi

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/28/2023 6:03:00 AM

- A good one ... :))) .. (I have to try to do one) - hugs

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2023 12:31:00 PM

Thanks so much, Anne Lise. Hugs, SuZ

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/28/2023 5:55:00 AM

That is superb, Suz. You aced this Bantu.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/29/2023 12:32:00 PM

Thanks so much, Vijay: Looking forward vey much to judging this contest. Best, SuZ