Beach Umbrella

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a sea of color giving shade to cool the sand the beach umbrella

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/7/2019 10:14:00 PM

I almost never think of beach umbrellas, but I suspect you live closer to a beach. A sweetly innocent write that made me smile.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/28/2019 3:16:00 AM

Thank you, Caren. Glad it gave you a smile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/7/2019 5:12:00 PM

A great colorful Haiku! :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/28/2019 3:17:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/7/2019 3:17:00 PM

Definitely shading...there's no coconut trees around...that's hot...Nice imagery...

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 7/28/2019 3:18:00 AM

Thank you Arturo.