Beach Sunset

beach sunset--
orange spills out of the sea
to touch your feet

naturehaiku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2013 8:45:00 AM

Ahh!! It must have been a beauty..Enjoyed reading your very creative work..Thanks for your visit..Your reviews are always uplifting..I hope that this is a good day for you.Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2013 5:31:00 PM

Congratulations for one of the best on the list!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/25/2013 10:45:00 PM

to touch your feet, beautiful. Many congrats Kash for this win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2013 8:07:00 PM

Kash, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Michael Dom

Date: 4/24/2013 10:13:00 AM

Kash, I recall admiring this haiku when I was passing through. Congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2013 2:16:00 AM

Very, very beautiful imagery in your haiku Kash. Congrats on your wonderful win! Loved this one!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/23/2013 12:52:00 PM

Enjoyed again....congratulations Kash

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/23/2013 10:10:00 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/22/2013 2:22:00 PM

pretty... love your use of color in this :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/19/2013 8:04:00 AM

You are la creme de la creme when t comes to haoku..Wow

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/16/2013 8:51:00 PM

I want to be there.......feeling the orange water lap at my toes! Love the colors of my imagination!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2013 5:28:00 PM

hey there, I have been here an hour now and I'm not even half done. Ugggg. it sure hurts to miss two or three days at Soup!!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/15/2013 9:38:00 PM

So lovely Kash....like being at the end of a rainbow...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/15/2013 10:30:00 AM

a 'ku like no other, as always... wrote springtime showers.. i'm here; sent you email, dear kash!..huggles..:)

Shane Cogan

Date: 4/15/2013 10:04:00 AM

Super stuff! A really uplifting, haiku. Keep them coming! Shane

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2013 7:57:00 AM

a nice and awesome sunset.... my toes are tingling right now... natural imagery.. xox..Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2013 7:37:00 AM

fave!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2013 7:36:00 AM

LOVE IT!!!!! way to go, Kash.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/15/2013 7:20:00 AM

You've done it again.! This is so lovely...you have a romantic heart. BG

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/15/2013 6:52:00 AM

This is beautiful, a gorgeous write my friend! I really loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a tremendous and enjoyable piece, Great Work!!