Beach Rose Wafts In the Air

beach rose wafts in the air
pink blooms border the foggy path
sounds of crashing ocean waves near 
flocks of gulls soar and dive 
for crabs washed up along the shore

5/14/19

Writing Challenge 2, May 2019 Lind68668 Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Dear Heart

Theme: A Living Scene

6/27/19 Submitted to contest, Your favourite Poem from May 2019, sponsor and judge Julia Ward.
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Toney Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Lovely poem, Tania. ~Mark
Kitchin Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 6:03 PM
Thank you Mark!
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 7:34 PM
love the imagery you showed us here. Congrats on this beautiful poem.
Kitchin Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Thank you Andrea! :)
Lindley Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert
Kitchin Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Thank you Robert, I enjoyed your poetry form! :)
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 11:59 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! :)
Wolf Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 11:46 AM
All the sense engaged in this winner, Tania! Congrats! :) gw
Kitchin Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Thank you Gershon! :)
La France Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 9:32 AM
Tania, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem !
Kitchin Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 11:42 AM
Thank you Constance and thank you for my wonderful placement!
Faulkner Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 7:32 PM
This is so evocative - I can smell the sea air and feel the sand between my toes, good luck in the contest, Tania!
Kitchin Avatar
May 19, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Thank you Michelle!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 1:30 PM
You have brought us a vision in poetry form. Well done indeed Tania. I wish I was there smelling those crabs on the beach.
Kitchin Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Thank you Caren, it is a beach scene I love!
Leffanta Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 2:38 PM
Oh, if only the seagulls would go for the crabs instead of people or trash, but well caught, indeed! Good luck in the contest! Aloha! Rico
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Thank you for your comments Rico and for stopping by!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 11:28 AM
I wish I was there! Divine imagery :) Good luck in the contest! xomo
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Thank you for your comments MO and for stopping by!:)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 5:18 AM
Ah the cycle of nature, best wishes to you Tania, Aloha wk
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Thank you WK!
Mchattie Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Crabs on the beach give me the willy nillys. Ewww. But the rest sounds wonderful. Have a great day,
Kitchin Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 4:32 AM
Thanks for your comments and for stopping by!
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