Brian Magness Poet Limerick

Beach Proposal

We went for a walk on the beach
His hand for my hand did reach
Walking together
It seemed like forever
A marriage proposal he did beseech.

He spoke again said you’re squeezing my hand
As my feet felt like led in the sand
I stopped in my track
Felt my smile crack
Then he showed me the wedding band.

I could no longer contain my feeling
Inside I would have hit the ceiling
Of course I said yes 
To his great request
And now my heart he is stealing.


For contest “Loveland Limerick”  
JT76945
Brian Magness

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Dr Hitendra Mehta April 12, 2011 at 5:01 AM Many congrats Brian on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Caryl Muzzey April 11, 2011 at 9:33 AM Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Harry Horsman April 11, 2011 at 6:37 AM excellent rendering, really enjoyed this, congrats. Harry

Black Eyed Susan April 11, 2011 at 5:23 AM Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown April 11, 2011 at 4:54 AM Congratulations on your win Brian in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich April 10, 2011 at 2:46 PM a cute idea to make it a proposal on a beach. Congratulations, Brian.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 10, 2011 at 1:38 PM Congratulations on the 13th place win in the contest, Brian

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 10, 2011 at 11:32 AM this is such a sweet & romantic write Brian-- love that it is written in Linda's point of view :) Congrats on your win :)

Joe Maverick April 10, 2011 at 10:46 AM Good to see you have had a result here Brian, all rthe best.

John Freeman April 10, 2011 at 10:37 AM Good to see your poem in the top 13, Brian. Congratulations on your honored 13th place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 10, 2011 at 8:12 AM Congrats Brian on your success in my contest with this excellent entry luv.. appreciate u supporting my contest luv..keep on ...

Constance La France April 7, 2011 at 8:39 PM Very romantic and lovely, best of luck in the contest, and thanks so much for commenting on my poetry~~

Dr.Ram Mehta April 7, 2011 at 6:35 AM Nice romance and feeling of love , Brian

Carolyn Devonshire April 6, 2011 at 9:18 PM Oh, what a delightful way to propose! I would have said "yes" too! Best wishes in the contest, Brian. Carolyn