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Beach Proposal

We went for a walk on the beach His hand for my hand did reach Walking together It seemed like forever A marriage proposal he did beseech. He spoke again said you’re squeezing my hand As my feet felt like led in the sand I stopped in my track Felt my smile crack Then he showed me the wedding band. I could no longer contain my feeling Inside I would have hit the ceiling Of course I said yes To his great request And now my heart he is stealing. For contest “Loveland Limerick” JT76945 Brian Magness

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Date: 4/12/2011 5:01:00 AM
Many congrats Brian on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/11/2011 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:37:00 AM
excellent rendering, really enjoyed this, congrats. Harry
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Brian in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:46:00 PM
a cute idea to make it a proposal on a beach. Congratulations, Brian.
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Date: 4/10/2011 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the 13th place win in the contest, Brian
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:32:00 AM
this is such a sweet & romantic write Brian-- love that it is written in Linda's point of view :) Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:46:00 AM
Good to see you have had a result here Brian, all rthe best.
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:37:00 AM
Good to see your poem in the top 13, Brian. Congratulations on your honored 13th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:12:00 AM
Congrats Brian on your success in my contest with this excellent entry luv.. appreciate u supporting my contest luv..keep on ...
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Date: 4/7/2011 8:39:00 PM
Very romantic and lovely, best of luck in the contest, and thanks so much for commenting on my poetry~~
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Date: 4/7/2011 6:35:00 AM
Nice romance and feeling of love , Brian
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Date: 4/6/2011 9:18:00 PM
Oh, what a delightful way to propose! I would have said "yes" too! Best wishes in the contest, Brian. Carolyn
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