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Beach of Bliss

Sultry summer night;
stars are winking at the moon.
As I gaze at you,
ocean’s tide rolls in. . . . We kiss.
Stars now wink at us! What bliss.


For Brian Strand's
FOURS AND FIVES single poem of 4 or 5 lines,
any form or theme Poetry Contest

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Adelaja Olayiwola

Date: 12/17/2011 4:23:00 AM

a worthy win. Love, adelaja

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/16/2011 9:32:00 AM

Congratulation my friend on your grand win and wish you and all yours 'Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/13/2011 5:58:00 PM

A very romantic write, Andrea. I like the thought of stars winking. Congrats on your 1st place win. Kim

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/13/2011 8:44:00 AM

It so sweet,Andrea.Congratulations on your great win!

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/13/2011 4:34:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your great win with this romantic write, love Wilma

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/13/2011 1:40:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea well written x

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/13/2011 12:08:00 AM

Those silly stars are interrupting a romantic kiss, Andrea! Personification at its best. Congrats to you amidst the company of the other great poets at the top of the winner's list. All the best, Gwendolen

Don Johnson

Date: 12/12/2011 11:55:00 PM

well done babe, flows pretty good too...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/12/2011 4:59:00 PM

yeah you TOO be part of the happy dance! #1 Congrad's Light & Love

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 12/12/2011 4:27:00 PM

congrats on your 1st place andrea, I remember this one, and commented before on how lovely it is...thanks for placing my poem so high in the silver strands contest, I wasn't sure how it would be received, but you know me andrea haha, so nice to see you co-judging a contest :-)

David Williams

Date: 12/12/2011 2:46:00 PM

Andrea congrats on your win, could you get a deck chair and towel ready on that beach for me, ha ha ha..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 12:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2011 6:52:00 AM

It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Andrea. Love, Carol