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Beach of Bliss

Sultry summer night;
stars are winking at the moon.
As I gaze at you,
ocean’s tide rolls in. . . . We kiss.
Stars now wink at us! What bliss.


For Brian Strand's
FOURS AND FIVES single poem of 4 or 5 lines,
any form or theme Poetry Contest

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Adelaja Olayiwola

December 17, 2011 at 4:23 AM

a worthy win. Love, adelaja

Bl Devnath

December 16, 2011 at 9:32 AM

Congratulation my friend on your grand win and wish you and all yours 'Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl

Kim Merryman

December 13, 2011 at 5:58 PM

A very romantic write, Andrea. I like the thought of stars winking. Congrats on your 1st place win. Kim

Fabiyas M V

December 13, 2011 at 8:44 AM

It so sweet,Andrea.Congratulations on your great win!

Wilma Neels

December 13, 2011 at 4:34 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your great win with this romantic write, love Wilma

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 13, 2011 at 1:40 AM

Congratulations Andrea well written x

Gwendolen Song

December 13, 2011 at 12:08 AM

Those silly stars are interrupting a romantic kiss, Andrea! Personification at its best. Congrats to you amidst the company of the other great poets at the top of the winner's list. All the best, Gwendolen

Don Johnson

December 12, 2011 at 11:55 PM

well done babe, flows pretty good too...

Debbie Guzzi

December 12, 2011 at 4:59 PM

yeah you TOO be part of the happy dance! #1 Congrad's Light & Love

Charlotte Puddifoot

December 12, 2011 at 4:27 PM

congrats on your 1st place andrea, I remember this one, and commented before on how lovely it is...thanks for placing my poem so high in the silver strands contest, I wasn't sure how it would be received, but you know me andrea haha, so nice to see you co-judging a contest :-)

David Williams

December 12, 2011 at 2:46 PM

Andrea congrats on your win, could you get a deck chair and towel ready on that beach for me, ha ha ha..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 12, 2011 at 12:01 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 21, 2011 at 6:52 AM

It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Andrea. Love, Carol