Beach Frolic

bright pink flamingos frolic in the crashing waves ~ dodging the buzzards 1/27/19

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Warren Doll

Date: 2/1/2019 4:04:00 PM

Great haiku, Tania. Unique last line. warmest Wishes~ Warren

Tania Kitchin
Date: 2/1/2019 4:14:00 PM

Thank you Warren!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/29/2019 12:32:00 PM

What a lovely image you have projected, Tania! This would have been an ideal entry for your own contest:) Regards // Paul

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/29/2019 4:12:00 PM

Thank you!

Constance La France

Date: 1/29/2019 8:03:00 AM

Tania, great poem, yes besides man the flamingos only have one other enemy and that is buzzards ~

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/29/2019 4:12:00 PM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2019 4:06:00 PM

oh how imaginative. YOu found a way to combine those two birds!!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/27/2019 4:26:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/27/2019 6:40:00 AM

Nice imagery!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/27/2019 8:27:00 AM

Thank you Valerie!

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/27/2019 6:13:00 AM

Nice one! :)

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/27/2019 8:27:00 AM

Thank you Heidi!