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Beach Day~ (haiku)

Cool quenching water Relaxed floating I lay calm Hear the sea echo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/13/2008 4:06:00 PM
I've always felt at peace by the water and this poem captures that essence. I especially like the last line. I enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing this optimistic view with us and for your kind words regarding my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen
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