Beach Picnic For Two

BEACH   PICNIC  FOR  TWO
 
Calm and tideless,
Warm and timeless,
Unsalted, undeep –
Warm Baltic half-asleep
 
Hot sand, hard pebbles –
Dark sparkling crystals
Heated and sunlit,
Ancient and granite
 
In the tree’s glad shade we rest.
Sand and branches make our nest.
Seeds fall on us in a shower
From the bird-cherry’s fragrant flower
 
Hungry from the happy day,
The bright and shady,  lazy bay.
Cool  aroma in the dark –
Cooking  fire’s smoking bark.
 
Sandy sandwich, melting cheese,
Brush the breadcrumbs from our knees.
Afternoon of scented air
For a carefree laughing pair

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(Description of an actual picnic for my wife and myself.)

Written  for   Carol Brown's   Contest   -  PICNIC TIME

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/20/2011 11:18:00 PM
oh, it's a little bit like mine, a romantic picnic for two. Congrats. It is sweet and descriptive.
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Date: 5/20/2011 11:37:00 PM
yes indeed, and did you notice that we both wrote same title and similar poems for I AM BORED WITH _______ ....... ........omg it's starting to get spooky...twilight zone...... woo-oo-woo-oo....LOL....best wishes Andrea
Date: 5/19/2011 9:51:00 AM
I remember this one so well, Syd. Congratulations on your win in Carol's Picnic Contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 9:02:00 AM
A beautiful entry in the contest.. and true too!!.. love the rhymes..Congratulations Sydney on your win..gautami ..and Oh ! I didn't know you aren't a girl, because I know one Sydney who is...mea culpa..sorry :))
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:52:00 PM
Sydney, so great to see you on the winner's list with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 11:19:00 AM
Congrats Sydney on your well deserved win in the contest..
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Date: 5/18/2011 10:17:00 AM
ahhh pesky crumbs BUt enjoyable brushing! Hug Tanya for me Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/18/2011 9:29:00 AM
Very nicely done Sydney. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/18/2011 8:01:00 AM
awwwh, you are sooo sweet, syd.. lyrical and floating like a breeze.. tons of cheers for the grand win! :) hugggs
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Syd. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol for this nice write, Sydney
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Date: 5/18/2011 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:16:00 PM
Wonderful write Syd ..good luck in the contest luv.. sounds like an interesting picnic time..luv..
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:56:00 PM
Having never seen the Baltic, I was intrigued by your descriptions, Syd. Even though the pebbles are hard, it sounds like a great spot to spend an day, smelling the "cool aroma." Wishing you success in Carol's great contest. Still trying to come up with something for it, but who can keep up with all these contests? Love, Carolyn
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