Beach

walking on soft sand water lapping at my feet... birds sing overhead Date Written: 8/15/2022 3 Place Nature Themed Haiku Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin How Many Syllables

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/8/2022 12:10:00 PM

Simple, sweet, and quite peaceful. Very well penned

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/15/2022 1:13:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/27/2022 1:09:00 AM

Congrats on your win; this is beautiful.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2022 8:07:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like this beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day..............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2022 1:34:00 PM

congrats on your win with this soothing KU

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2022 11:40:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like my write. Have a great/fun/blessed day..............

Charles Messina

Date: 8/24/2022 2:37:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Paula. Congrats on your placement. Blessings...Charlie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/24/2022 9:17:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you love this haiku write. I love walking the beach with my toes in the sand/water. I sure do miss it. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Len Gasun

Date: 8/23/2022 6:51:00 AM

Splendid imagery! I feel like walking on the beach with you my dear friend. I love your poem. Congratulations on your win and this wonderful haiku! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2022 10:01:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. I love walking the beach with my toes in the sand/water. I sure do miss it. Maybe again one day. What fun it would be if we could walk together and talk. Glad you love this haiku beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Valsa George

Date: 8/22/2022 6:56:00 PM

A beautiful experience imaginatively delivered ! Congratulations, dear Paula. Hugs and Blessings !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2022 9:56:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like my fun beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/22/2022 3:56:00 PM

Peaceful and blissful images are evoked in your wonderful haiku, Paula. Congratulations on your win. Blessings. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2022 9:55:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Oh yes, I would love to walk a beach. What a peaceful place to be. Maybe one day. Glad you like my haiku beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/22/2022 1:56:00 PM

ooh...I'd like to have my toes in the sand about now Paula! Great write. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/23/2022 9:54:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Yes, toes in the sand is where I want to be. I love walking the beach. Maybe again one day. I sure do miss it. Glad you like this beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/22/2022 7:57:00 AM

Picturesque! Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2022 10:40:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like my beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/22/2022 5:24:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/22/2022 10:38:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I did not know I had a win with my beach write. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like my fun day at the beach. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/19/2022 10:33:00 AM

Ready to go for a walk on the beach Paula. I can feel the soft sand and hear the waves lapping (great sensory word) on the shore. Thanks for the trip to the beach. Blessings and hugs!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/19/2022 11:08:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed the fun day at the beach write. Guess the only beach trip I can now take is my my dreams. I miss walking the beach with the sea water/sand in my toes/feet. I hope heaven has a huge beach that I can walk on everyday. Have a great/fun/blessed~day/weekend.........

Bill Baker

Date: 8/19/2022 7:55:00 AM

I enjoyed your Haiku, Paula. Glad you had an enjoyable day at the beach. Hugs, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/19/2022 10:17:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Haiku beach write. It was just a write. I really miss walking the beach. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Michael Tor

Date: 8/16/2022 9:53:00 PM

I could feel between my toes what you wrote Paula. Nicely written... God bless you...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2022 9:44:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun day at the beach write. I miss walking the beach with the sea water and sand in my toes/feet. Those were heavenly/peaceful days. I hope heaven has a huge beach that I can walk some everyday. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2022 1:08:00 PM

the kind of nature scene I want to be IN!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/17/2022 9:38:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun beach write. I wish we were walking a beach and talking. That would be heavenly. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/16/2022 6:52:00 AM

A lovely image Paula, have experienced that a few times this summer. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2022 8:55:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your best of luck. Glad you like my beach write. You are so blessed to be on a beach this summer. I feel walking on a beach is heavenly. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/16/2022 4:07:00 AM

Beautiful. God bless you . Love, Gina

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2022 8:51:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. I love walking on the beach with the sand/water under my feet. Wish I had a beach near to me. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Jim Slaughter

Date: 8/15/2022 11:46:00 AM

I'm not really a "beach person", but I'm with Kim on this one, Paula. What a wonderful way to spend a day.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 1:49:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like this Haiku write. I love walking the beach. Sand and water under my feet is heaven on earth. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2022 11:42:00 AM

Haikus are a wonderful way to log our daily activity! Hugs ~ Kim

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2022 1:42:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. I love and miss the beach. Walking in the sand along the water is heavenly. So true, "Haikus are a wonderful way to log our daily activity." Have a great/fun/blessed day with hugs.......................