Beach

walking on soft sand 
water lapping at my feet... 
birds sing overhead 

 

Date Written: 8/15/2022 

3 Place 

 Nature Themed Haiku 
 Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 
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Paghunda Zahid

September 8, 2022 at 12:10 PM

Simple, sweet, and quite peaceful. Very well penned

Paula Goldsmith

December 15, 2022 at 1:13 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing to me........................

Caren Krutsinger

August 27, 2022 at 1:09 AM

Congrats on your win; this is beautiful.

Paula Goldsmith

August 27, 2022 at 8:07 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like this beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day..............

Andrea Dietrich

August 25, 2022 at 1:34 PM

congrats on your win with this soothing KU

Paula Goldsmith

August 26, 2022 at 11:40 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like my write. Have a great/fun/blessed day..............

Charles Messina

August 24, 2022 at 2:37 AM

Lovely haiku, Paula. Congrats on your placement. Blessings...Charlie

Paula Goldsmith

August 24, 2022 at 9:17 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you love this haiku write. I love walking the beach with my toes in the sand/water. I sure do miss it. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Len Gasun

August 23, 2022 at 6:51 AM

Splendid imagery! I feel like walking on the beach with you my dear friend. I love your poem. Congratulations on your win and this wonderful haiku! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

August 23, 2022 at 10:01 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. I love walking the beach with my toes in the sand/water. I sure do miss it. Maybe again one day. What fun it would be if we could walk together and talk. Glad you love this haiku beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Valsa George

August 22, 2022 at 6:56 PM

A beautiful experience imaginatively delivered ! Congratulations, dear Paula. Hugs and Blessings !

Paula Goldsmith

August 23, 2022 at 9:56 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like my fun beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 22, 2022 at 3:56 PM

Peaceful and blissful images are evoked in your wonderful haiku, Paula. Congratulations on your win. Blessings. :)

Paula Goldsmith

August 23, 2022 at 9:55 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Oh yes, I would love to walk a beach. What a peaceful place to be. Maybe one day. Glad you like my haiku beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Linda Alice Fowler

August 22, 2022 at 1:56 PM

ooh...I'd like to have my toes in the sand about now Paula! Great write. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Paula Goldsmith

August 23, 2022 at 9:54 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Yes, toes in the sand is where I want to be. I love walking the beach. Maybe again one day. I sure do miss it. Glad you like this beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Christuraj Alex

August 22, 2022 at 7:57 AM

Picturesque! Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

August 22, 2022 at 10:40 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like my beach write. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Tania Kitchin

August 22, 2022 at 5:24 AM

Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!

Paula Goldsmith

August 22, 2022 at 10:38 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. I did not know I had a win with my beach write. I am honored to have this win. Glad you like my fun day at the beach. Have a great/fun/blessed day...............

Sam Kauffman

August 19, 2022 at 10:33 AM

Ready to go for a walk on the beach Paula. I can feel the soft sand and hear the waves lapping (great sensory word) on the shore. Thanks for the trip to the beach. Blessings and hugs!

Paula Goldsmith

August 19, 2022 at 11:08 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed the fun day at the beach write. Guess the only beach trip I can now take is my my dreams. I miss walking the beach with the sea water/sand in my toes/feet. I hope heaven has a huge beach that I can walk on everyday. Have a great/fun/blessed~day/weekend.........

Bill Baker

August 19, 2022 at 7:55 AM

I enjoyed your Haiku, Paula. Glad you had an enjoyable day at the beach. Hugs, Bill

Paula Goldsmith

August 19, 2022 at 10:17 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Haiku beach write. It was just a write. I really miss walking the beach. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Michael Tor

August 16, 2022 at 9:53 PM

I could feel between my toes what you wrote Paula. Nicely written... God bless you...

Paula Goldsmith

August 17, 2022 at 9:44 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun day at the beach write. I miss walking the beach with the sea water and sand in my toes/feet. Those were heavenly/peaceful days. I hope heaven has a huge beach that I can walk some everyday. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Andrea Dietrich

August 16, 2022 at 1:08 PM

the kind of nature scene I want to be IN!!

Paula Goldsmith

August 17, 2022 at 9:38 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun beach write. I wish we were walking a beach and talking. That would be heavenly. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Tom Cunningham

August 16, 2022 at 6:52 AM

A lovely image Paula, have experienced that a few times this summer. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Paula Goldsmith

August 16, 2022 at 8:55 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your best of luck. Glad you like my beach write. You are so blessed to be on a beach this summer. I feel walking on a beach is heavenly. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Regina Mcintosh

August 16, 2022 at 4:07 AM

Beautiful. God bless you . Love, Gina

Paula Goldsmith

August 16, 2022 at 8:51 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. I love walking on the beach with the sand/water under my feet. Wish I had a beach near to me. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Jim Slaughter

August 15, 2022 at 11:46 AM

I'm not really a "beach person", but I'm with Kim on this one, Paula. What a wonderful way to spend a day.

Paula Goldsmith

August 15, 2022 at 1:49 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like this Haiku write. I love walking the beach. Sand and water under my feet is heaven on earth. Have a great/fun/blessed day..........

Kim Rodrigues

August 15, 2022 at 11:42 AM

Haikus are a wonderful way to log our daily activity! Hugs ~ Kim

Paula Goldsmith

August 15, 2022 at 1:42 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. I love and miss the beach. Walking in the sand along the water is heavenly. So true, "Haikus are a wonderful way to log our daily activity." Have a great/fun/blessed day with hugs.......................

Beach

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