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Be Triumphant

Strive for a good start midst hopeful heart… Greet the day with delight thank the Lord for light. Keep marching onward press on forward… Reach good goal with your best led by God’s full zest. Aim for fulfillment in your accomplishment pursuing victory for the Master’s glory. Vanquish selfish pout overcome doubt… Reach-out with love’s kindness by Christ’s graciousness. Blow away each woe by serenity glow Always seek to rejoice fulfilling right choice. Work well while you pray midst blissful ray Gear for triumphant* fly soar toward faith high. *2Corinthians 2:14 Now thanks be unto God, which always causeth us to triumph in Christ, and maketh manifest the savour of his knowledge by us in every place. November 27, 2021 Lyric in quatrain form Honorable Mention, "SECOND CHANCE FOR YOUR N-A" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 12/19/2022.

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Date: 1/3/2023 10:33:00 AM
Amen Beata! You have filled each stanza with triumphant messages of faith. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you for the new year!
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Date: 12/21/2022 2:57:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/29/2021 4:25:00 PM
you chose a great tune for your wonderful message, Beata. Mine is from Sound of Music too!
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Date: 11/27/2021 9:52:00 AM
A beautiful song Beata
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Date: 11/27/2021 7:07:00 AM
Beaytiful song Beata, I liked the way you stair-steped the verses to appear like a mountain. Very creative. fits the song well. Nice choice of scripture as note. Your friend, Bill
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