be thuh gibbous be it's rotund lit
.
not 'cauze uh
thuh blink
moon'z
nor it's full
yet
'cauze yourn
uh
and thuh spindrift's
splutter
in tide'z
thuh
drool
whilst mine wadez
shloshz
moilz
*'tiz thuh example uv thuh "drip'n dip"
with thuh title ') ...
at thuh moment (until, if when then "dip"
becomes thuh recognize'd "poetic form") thuh creator uv
this form retains thuh right/write to title 'dips' at this time,
yet, az i've mention'd; "esta es una bendición de Yahweh",
therefore, expand this poetic form uv think if yourn pleazez
with your title...let edvard know though;
'you've think'd uh "dip"
much love ,)
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