Be Thine Mine

My red tresses fall against your cheek
As I bend down, your lips to seek.
Breathless whisper when we speak.
Eyes that burn with desire.
Two hearts, both afire.
While hands explore
Words implore
"Be thine...
Mine?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 10:47 PM
All the time , the red red wine, enflames of the passion, love without love, is shortened is, the ration,:) xo Don...
Gorelick Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Steamy , yet classy. Well done..I like that you chose a nonet..works well here. BG
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 3:31 PM
I really love the image of the red tresses falling against his cheek. Cool!! Is it for a contest, Francine?
Aul Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Sizzling....George
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