Be My Love

In the joy of my heart, please be my love,
in the peace of my soul, bring love to me,
be my love and we shall wing high above,
within my soul, love, I shall come to see.

Within the clouds that are downy and soft,
you shall ever be the heart of the dove,
together we meet in the sky aloft,
in the stars, you shall ever be my love.

Be my love, my heart is ever singing,
the joy of Heaven I feel, deep within,
The peace of our hearts, we are now bringing,
to love that can never be called a sin.

Be my love and we shall wing high above,
in the joy of my heart, please be my love.

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Date: 11/23/2023 7:52:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Romantic one. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with all of us. Sara K
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Date: 7/29/2022 2:00:00 PM
I do love a good Sonnet, Mike. Thanks for this lovely love sonnet. Bill
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/30/2022 2:18:00 PM
Hi Bill, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I do like using the Sonnet form when it comes to the romantic writes but I am always willing to try any form for them. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend ..... Mike.
Date: 7/27/2022 11:58:00 AM
Hello Mike, wow! This is so romantic. I felt the passion as I was reading this poem. A very strong passion. Hugs Darlene xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2022 2:49:00 PM
Mike , I hope you had a nice day. xxx. Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2022 2:48:00 PM
Hello Mike, you are very welcome. I like this piece. As I was reading this poem, I felt the passion sing.Enjoyyour evening . Hugs always Hugs Darlene
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/27/2022 2:16:00 PM
Hi Darlene, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Romance always manages to sing. Passion ever sings within the soul and the heart ever wants to sing. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
Date: 7/27/2022 6:56:00 AM
A very beautiful sonnet, but you are a true romantic and your poems are a joy to read. Everyone has a style or write about what the love, you love and feel love, your poetry exquisite my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/27/2022 2:09:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Love is ever singing within me, my friend. It gives me the greatest joy to write on love. Maybe Mr. romance is back. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
Date: 7/27/2022 1:26:00 AM
Your sonnet is of highest grade. Loved it.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/27/2022 2:01:00 PM
Hi Victor, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I enjoy writing love poetry. It brings me a great joy and inner peace. The songs ever want to be sung. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend always ..... Mike.
Date: 7/26/2022 8:53:00 PM
"Be my love and we shall wing high above, in the joy of my heart, please be my love." A beautiful song of love rhyming with deep passions. Thanks for your visit and kind comment ! A great sonnet in toto, dear poet friend....
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/27/2022 1:46:00 PM
Hi Valsa, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The heart is ever singing the joy of love. In this way I manage to find my inner peace. I am glad I payed the visit to your wonderful poetry. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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