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Be Forever Mine

*Scene is set *

romance in the air
picnic in the forest glen
champagne is on ice


**Anticipation**

question to ask her
wild willows bend to listen 
by the babbling brook

***Be mine***

red rose in my hand
on bended knee I propose
will you marry me?

02~02~15
Contest Double Valentine Haiku + Questionku#2 PD
~awarded 7th place~

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/26/2015 5:42:00 PM Congrat on your winning work..Way to go..Lovely photo for your inspiration..Sara Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/26/2015 5:45:00 PM Thanks Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/24/2015 6:32:00 PM way to go, Jan. It's fun seeing all the winners. Congrats to you, my friend. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/24/2015 6:46:00 PM Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 3/22/2015 2:55:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Jan. I must have missed this one before! It is very creative; from the male point of view...according to the picture! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/23/2015 12:46:00 PM Thanks for dropping by Paul:-) Hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/22/2015 1:46:00 PM JAN, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 3/23/2015 12:45:00 PM Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaafar Sadig El Waad Date: 2/23/2015 4:38:00 AM very nice culture. it's nice stopping by Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/23/2015 5:30:00 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Jaafar:-) hugs jan xx

Funom Makama Date: 2/6/2015 7:34:00 AM A lovely piece well penned down. Nothing short of a 7 is what it deserves. Its nice stopping by Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/6/2015 9:36:00 AM Thank you so much for the lovely comment and rating:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser Date: 2/5/2015 2:49:00 PM Beautifully penned. I'm am certain that the answer was, "yes". Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/5/2015 4:45:00 PM Thanks so much ML:-) Hugs jan xxx

James Fraser Date: 2/4/2015 4:44:00 PM Just delightful Jan, oh to be in such a scene, hugs, James xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/4/2015 4:51:00 PM It is purely a fiction write - never happened for me James - I proposed to my hubby - and for some reason he said YES - will have been married 24 yrs in June:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian Date: 2/4/2015 12:32:00 PM Lovely, Jan. You are such a great write, dear. :) Good luck in the contest. Hugs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/4/2015 4:48:00 PM Thanks so much Eileen for your continued support:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/3/2015 6:24:00 PM cute and romantic idea, dear Jan! Boy, I need to get busy on these new contests before they all fill up. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2015 6:27:00 PM There are some tough challenges for us Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Jack Horne Date: 2/3/2015 3:12:00 PM awww, very romantic Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2015 3:14:00 PM Thanks so much Jack for your continued support:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade Date: 2/2/2015 6:10:00 PM Old man willow is going to break a branch if the answer does not come quickly!! Lovely dear Jan!! 7 Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/3/2015 1:16:00 AM Thanks David:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 2/2/2015 6:00:00 PM So beautiful...A dream scene....hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/2/2015 6:03:00 PM Thanks Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper Date: 2/2/2015 5:25:00 PM Another gem you have produced my friend. i am sure you will do well in the competition. i really life the Haiku form so simple and yet so elegant, it suits the scene of a marrage proposal perfectly. Love Shane Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 2/2/2015 6:06:00 PM my PM was gifted to me it expires in March I am in 2 minds about renewing it I have issues with the site that despite 4 mails to TPS are not resolved in fact haven't even been answered. Dad is fading:-( thanks for asking:-) hugs jan x Jan Allison Date: 2/2/2015 5:42:00 PM Thanks so much Shane - I just write and hope with the contests i have 15 N/A's on my current page lol guess you cant win them all. Today is my 1 yr anniversary here! wow what a journey!!! Hugs jan x