Jan Allison Poet Haiku

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Be Forever Mine

*Scene is set *

romance in the air
picnic in the forest glen
champagne is on ice


**Anticipation**

question to ask her
wild willows bend to listen 
by the babbling brook

***Be mine***

red rose in my hand
on bended knee I propose
will you marry me?

02~02~15
Contest Double Valentine Haiku + Questionku#2 PD
~awarded 7th place~

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Sara Kendrick March 26, 2015 at 5:42 PM Congrat on your winning work..Way to go..Lovely photo for your inspiration..Sara Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 5:45 PM Thanks Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2015 at 6:32 PM way to go, Jan. It's fun seeing all the winners. Congrats to you, my friend. Jan Allison March 24, 2015 at 6:46 PM Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus March 22, 2015 at 2:55 PM Congratulations on your win, Jan. I must have missed this one before! It is very creative; from the male point of view...according to the picture! Hugs // paul Jan Allison March 23, 2015 at 12:46 PM Thanks for dropping by Paul:-) Hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A March 22, 2015 at 1:46 PM JAN, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA Jan Allison March 23, 2015 at 12:45 PM Thanks Linda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaafar Sadig El Waad February 23, 2015 at 4:38 AM very nice culture. it's nice stopping by Jan Allison February 23, 2015 at 5:30 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Jaafar:-) hugs jan xx

Funom Makama February 6, 2015 at 7:34 AM A lovely piece well penned down. Nothing short of a 7 is what it deserves. Its nice stopping by Jan Allison February 6, 2015 at 9:36 AM Thank you so much for the lovely comment and rating:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser February 5, 2015 at 2:49 PM Beautifully penned. I'm am certain that the answer was, "yes". Jan Allison February 5, 2015 at 4:45 PM Thanks so much ML:-) Hugs jan xxx

James Fraser February 4, 2015 at 4:44 PM Just delightful Jan, oh to be in such a scene, hugs, James xx Jan Allison February 4, 2015 at 4:51 PM It is purely a fiction write - never happened for me James - I proposed to my hubby - and for some reason he said YES - will have been married 24 yrs in June:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian February 4, 2015 at 12:32 PM Lovely, Jan. You are such a great write, dear. :) Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan Allison February 4, 2015 at 4:48 PM Thanks so much Eileen for your continued support:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2015 at 6:24 PM cute and romantic idea, dear Jan! Boy, I need to get busy on these new contests before they all fill up. Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 6:27 PM There are some tough challenges for us Andrea:-) Hugs jan xx

Jack Horne February 3, 2015 at 3:12 PM awww, very romantic Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 3:14 PM Thanks so much Jack for your continued support:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade February 2, 2015 at 6:10 PM Old man willow is going to break a branch if the answer does not come quickly!! Lovely dear Jan!! 7 Jan Allison February 3, 2015 at 1:16 AM Thanks David:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith February 2, 2015 at 6:00 PM So beautiful...A dream scene....hugs Tim Jan Allison February 2, 2015 at 6:03 PM Thanks Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shane Cooper February 2, 2015 at 5:25 PM Another gem you have produced my friend. i am sure you will do well in the competition. i really life the Haiku form so simple and yet so elegant, it suits the scene of a marrage proposal perfectly. Love Shane Jan Allison February 2, 2015 at 6:06 PM my PM was gifted to me it expires in March I am in 2 minds about renewing it I have issues with the site that despite 4 mails to TPS are not resolved in fact haven't even been answered. Dad is fading:-( thanks for asking:-) hugs jan x Jan Allison February 2, 2015 at 5:42 PM Thanks so much Shane - I just write and hope with the contests i have 15 N/A's on my current page lol guess you cant win them all. Today is my 1 yr anniversary here! wow what a journey!!! Hugs jan x