Be a Winner - Eternal Promise

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~ Be A Winner~ (Eternal Promise) You shouldn't concentrate in what's wrong But try to dwell more in what's good You'll reap more as you go along Do what's right as you know you should God wants you to be a winner Choose not to live like a sinner But try to dwell more in what's good Do what's right as you know you should Empty your mind of all the trash Nothing great amounts when living wild You'll just fall hard with a big splash So turn 'round don't act like a child You don't have to follow the crowd God want us humble and not proud Nothing great amounts when living wild So turn 'round don't act like a child Repent, give your life to the Lord Everything will turn 'round you'll see You will learn God's word is a sword God, love, faith, hope, are the right key To live better life not be blue Keep your feet on the ground be you Everything will turn 'round you'll see God, love, faith, hope, are the right key. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 September.6.2015 "Eternal Promise" is a poetry style, created by Christina R. Jussaume on 10/18/2009.

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 9/7/2015 9:18:00 AM

Loved your billboards for Jesus and your sound Biblical advice. Keep your feet on the ground (and your head and heart on Jesus). A 7. And thanks for reading my salvation poem....Blessings, Darlene

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/9/2015 7:00:00 PM

Again thank you for the 7, Darlene!:)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/9/2015 6:57:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Darlene,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it, nice to see you again. Glad that you liked my spiritual, inspirational poem and the graphics I chose for it:)Thanks for the 7 too!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D

Darlene Gifford
Date: 9/7/2015 9:20:00 AM

P.S. Forgot to check the 7. But now it's there.

Diane Christian

Date: 9/6/2015 10:34:00 AM

lovely poem

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/13/2015 4:33:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Diane,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit so very much:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 9/6/2015 8:55:00 AM

Very nice poem, and great advice

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/13/2015 4:34:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Gwen,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I appreciate your visit so very much:) Glad you liked it.I'll stop by your place very soon.Thanks again for your visit:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D