Bayonets

The grey sky
outside seems oddly comforting today.
My fire escape cuts a sharp, blackened 
silhouette against its 
iron-like visage, worthy 
of any modern art wannabe

I’m listening to Ken Burns
wax lyrical about the horrors 
of the Civil War. 
The bayonet charge ended with 
that war, apparently. 
A convention of death rendered obsolete 

I wonder what it must have felt like, 
shaking, staring at the savage tip
of the steel, ready to plunge.
Was it dull and grey like this sky?
Or as sharp and piercing 
as the Sun?
They were just boys 

Green tea, slippers and 
a cigarette are 
my comrades in arms today
And we shall revive the 
bayonet charge into unknown 
Tomorrow, unheeded and silent as the clouds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Aguilar Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:41 AM
Wow! I thought you were writing about me there for a bit. :)
Howels Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Haha thanks for reading it!
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