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Battling Vicious Cells

She traces a litter of rising stars; while exploring a place blissful within-- or even feel a desire to extend a timeline where vicious crimson cells invade those mounds of chalice breasts, uninvited. And a once vibrant energy grows frenetic , nearly withering from the changed biopsy of a frame now boney, lightly skeletal from a hostile tumor raging within Reena’s veins. Yet, she crawls uphill , this woman warrior of a hiker… steadily focused on reaching the mound’s crest, undaunted by lumped pain as soft tears glitter upon those thinning cheeks. Grappling with a second -stage notice, her limbs wobble in exhaustion, her fingers cold at the same time eager: treading on, I watch my friend dressed in bald crown, facing this combat between towers of hope and despondency. My breath weeps inside. Reena smiles and blinks at me like an advancing star. Topic Of Cancer for Craig Cornish 6/20/2019

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Date: 6/29/2019 12:38:00 AM
The hairs stood on my arms from these words of your friend's fortitude. When they smile at you under those conditions, it teaches us wisdom without words ever being spoken. My wife remained happy until the Lord opened his doors for her. The key is, never let them see you hurt, because they begin to grieve. Keep delivering friendship with a lot of laughter...it's priceless, as this poem is! Salute
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Date: 6/24/2019 10:54:00 AM
Another exceptional write Nette, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 6/23/2019 8:53:00 PM
Nette, you penned this one to pure perfection, Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 6/23/2019 7:38:00 PM
Exceptional writing Nette, so much so that you're always expected to be at the top and you never disappoint.
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Date: 6/23/2019 7:30:00 PM
Bravo, netter. Well deserved silver medal win.
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Date: 6/22/2019 1:57:00 AM
Nette this is a definite win - you describe this situation mildly and gently yet one can read between the lines that this dreaded disease has taken its toll on Reena! A sad but beautiful poem Nette. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/21/2019 6:10:00 PM
Hi nette: I was deeply touched by this poignant but strong willed woman you portrayed. Buenos Suerte! ...Ralph
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Date: 6/21/2019 5:03:00 PM
'dressed in a bald crown' - so sad and brave and humbling, this is stunning-
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Date: 6/21/2019 3:16:00 PM
That disease is so dreadful..your description evokes battles that are so hard to fight and often lost..well written, as always.
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