Battle Rap - Verbal Flap Isn'T All That

You act like you’re all that -
gaining green when you rap,
but I say lines of utter crap
come from your verbal flap.
You lack and I can back that.

My slapjack, whapping facts
would not be rinsed with tact
since odds are a massive stack
of my fly responses so snap
they’ll waste yours to scrap.
You’ll bleed a need for a map
just to sense our distance gap.

I could secure a win wrap
in the deep sleep of a nap
with word whirls of pure blur
punching, crushing your rap,
maiming your able so unstable
it’s incapable to react transact 
any how to track your ego back.

My hit of truth would impact
and sack your rap so abstract
that my heard word redact
would squish lisp yours compact,
then subtract, detract, refract
and ransack precisely exact
the trash you call a talent act.

So, go! Sate-debate my rap trait.

 



Nick Trim's 8 Mile Style Poetry Contest
March 16, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 6/24/2018 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:07:00 AM
Congrats on your win, CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:54:00 AM
Way way Cool Cay Cay! Congrats to that you kep things under Rap. Hugs Rick
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Date: 3/25/2018 10:45:00 PM
What a fun rap, CayCay.Well done. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/25/2018 10:28:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in the contest with this sweet rhyming poem… Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/22/2018 7:49:00 PM
wow, Caycay, VERY impressive. I think this is more what she wanted than my "feast" but not being a fan of rap, that was the only way I could approach the contest. I fully expect to see THIS gem on the winner list!! thanks for your recent comments. I have 15 left to do and I can start watching tv!! Miss you!
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Date: 3/19/2018 10:03:00 AM
This is really good CayCay, you met the challenge really well.. Who would have thought you were a budding Eminem lol
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Date: 3/18/2018 2:23:00 AM
Quick firing like Aniie Oakley, CayCay- good luck ! Viv x
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Date: 3/17/2018 9:47:00 AM
I think I'll stick with rock-n-roll. Good luck, sweetie! You sent my mind tumbling.
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Date: 3/16/2018 9:21:00 PM
These words are like a song. I like the way they snap and slap in my head as I read.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/17/2018 12:07:00 AM
Hey, if you got snapped and slapped then my entry for the contest is as I was striving for! Glad to have confirmation from you that I did indeed rhyme battle. Thank you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/16/2018 8:42:00 PM
That had a catchy in your face rhythm to it. I could hear the bass track as I read this tonight. And that's a fact. :)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/17/2018 12:10:00 AM
Hey, Chris! Good to see you - hope all is golden in your world. Happy to have your take and my words aren't fake when I thank you for my gratitude's sake! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 3/16/2018 2:38:00 PM
Lively challenge, CayCay! Janice
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/17/2018 12:11:00 AM
Thank you, Janice - I am delighted to have your comment. All the best ... CayCay
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