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Battle of the Case

Harsh! The asphalt sac circumscribes my spirit drowning the spectacle of sapphire ambiance That whirls a blue crush over my suntanned face, whose temples are rippling with shimmering grin And ,merry bustling the spontaneous chills smothering my qua-spirits yet spray a fiery furnace of detesting Scandinavian epidermal whimpering over my incongruous antics with the talismanic chemist ritualistically rebirthing my vexed spirit chaffed away with enduring rejection of a taciturn corps that writhed aggravatingly for it dresses a being that is obvious of a race,say human identity....

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Date: 4/25/2025 11:53:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/23/2016 10:17:00 PM
BAGUMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 11/27/2013 10:52:00 AM
This is great i love it, it has great imagery
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