Viv Wigley Poet Limerick

Bats

When it isn't  asleep it will be
Upside down from the branch of a tree
By it's instinct it knows
To keep eyes and mouth closed
Every time it needs to have a pee.

For contest ' make me laugh', sponsor Christine Lehmann
26th August 2016

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CayCay Godwin August 29, 2016 at 2:12 PM Sure made me laugh - oh where the Viv mind goes. I hadn't thought of the possible dilemma bats have hanging upside down and I just love it that you did ... CayCay Viv Wigley August 29, 2016 at 2:22 PM When I was little I thought it happened to Australians, too.... thanks for dropping by, CayCay. Viv x

Janice Canerdy August 28, 2016 at 10:56 PM This is a good one, Viv! Made me laugh--a 7. Janice Viv Wigley August 29, 2016 at 1:12 AM Thanks, Janice, I aim to please, usually miss. Viv x

Paul Callus August 28, 2016 at 4:58 AM Excellent, Viv! If this doesn't make the sponsor laugh, then nothing will! All the best. // paul Viv Wigley August 29, 2016 at 1:13 AM Thanks, Paul, I suppose Sloths and bats must be the smelliest creatures on the planet. Regards, Viv

Arthur Vaso August 28, 2016 at 12:24 AM ops I am just adding a little humor, my ex wasn't that bat crazy!

Arthur Vaso August 28, 2016 at 12:23 AM At first I thought, oh my, is this about my ex, then I realized no this is about Bats!!! :) Hilarious Viv Viv Wigley August 28, 2016 at 12:45 AM You sure know how to pick 'em, Arthur. Thanks for dropping by. regards, Viv

Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2016 at 12:53 PM - :)))) a good one, Viv :))) - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Viv Wigley August 27, 2016 at 11:55 PM Thanks, Anne-Lise, not a nice mental picture, I know, but..... x

Daniel Turner August 27, 2016 at 7:59 AM Great one, Viv. I like the way you think! Lol Viv Wigley August 27, 2016 at 8:34 AM Upside down, apparently. Thanks, Daniel. regards, Viv

Jan Allison August 27, 2016 at 6:59 AM ha ha ha great one Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx Viv Wigley August 27, 2016 at 8:34 AM Not quite poop, Jan, but I try. Viv x