Bats

Acrobatic bats circle dark English fields gulping hairy insects joyfully,keeping lazy men napping on porches,quite regally snoring together,until various wild xenophiles yell zealously!

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Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/4/2010 9:27:00 AM

Wow, very nice poem in an ABC form. Congratualtions on being featured. Ernilando

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2010 2:32:00 PM

Congrats Bill on your featured poem on the Soup this week.. an excellent choice to feature and share...luv.. ""Sweetheart""

Sue Mason

Date: 3/30/2010 6:53:00 PM

LOL wonderful write here Bill and Welcome to PoetrySoup!! ABC's can be difficult and this one is excellent and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup!! Congratulations!!

Daver Austin

Date: 3/30/2010 6:09:00 AM

The form dictates perpetual motion, this one at rapid speed. I love this sort of reading... only had to stop to look up xenophiles. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Mitch White

Date: 3/30/2010 1:47:00 AM

Congrats on being featured Bill, on this very imaginative poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/29/2010 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Bill. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/28/2010 12:53:00 PM

congrats on the featured poem this week!! Enjoyed reading!!

Mitch White

Date: 3/18/2010 6:42:00 PM

Snoring together lol Love the poem