Bats

Black batS flew over my house
I thought they were after a mouse
Flew on me, I scream
Threw up all my ice-cream
Ran until I fell in a slaughter-house
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Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 2:06 PM
A ba(t) day! Phew...
Ward Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Ha Ha it was truly a bat day.
Michael Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 12:09 PM
Nice one...flows well too
Ward Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 8:31 AM
I would like to say thank-you very much.
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