Batman

Wearing a dishtowel around his shoulders as a cape
This gleeful child claiming to be Batman
Jumping off the footstool,
Leaping around the room,
Determined to save the world

Had to grow up
A world of worries of his own,
The enemy is  a mighty foe

There's always a furrow in the brow of youth
A childhood world he must let go

When the world contrives to knock you down,
who will come to rescue you?

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Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 2:03 PM
Had to do a new comment box.....I anted to say that I have to work hard at poetry, and I feel like it comes so naturally for you in your beautiful free verse. You are a true talent in contemporary poetry. I belong to another century I fear!! (and you would have done well in an older century too, Carrie. you are very versatile). Luv, Andrea
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December 4, 2012 at 2:02 PM
Carrie, I went back to your first page of poetry to find one I have not seen and this is adorable. Also I wanted you to know that I appreciate what you said to me on my number one spot. I hated to go above you because I feel that you are a more "natural" poet than I am and I hate the pressure of number one in contests. haha. Well, I will enjoy it for the time being until you pass me up again. Because it's a lot of pressure at the top! and you are more deserving.
Alldredge Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 1:47 AM
I can relate completely. It's hard to see our kids struggling. You have done a wonderful job with this poem.
Thekidster Avatar
November 27, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Can this super-hero still come to the rescue? From the look of this planet, somebody has to. Nice Piece and Congrats on your poem being featured this week Carrie. Best Wishes Always, Bill
Fisher Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Carrie - congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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November 23, 2009 at 7:59 PM
Interesting poem. Congratulations on your being featured this week. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Iolanda
Townsend Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. My now fourteen year old son loved Batman when he was small. He had a cape that he requested for Christmas. He wore it all the time. Thank you for bringing those great memories to mind. He is going through some tough times right now and rarely smiles but then he always had a great one. Smiles to you from Lolita
Fraser Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being shared with us this week Carrie >> James,x
Brown Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Carrie. Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 3:19 AM
Excellent write and well deserving selection for being featured this week. Best wishes and keep writing. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Strand Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 12:32 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Carrie.Rgds Brian
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November 22, 2009 at 6:42 PM
nicley penned, you still want to tickle him happy! I know the mom can't be turned off.
Degenhardt Avatar
July 24, 2008 at 8:13 AM
Very real, as I can remeber doing that when I was lzittle and now I cannot find Batman but rely on faith elsewhere. A marvelous well thought out and presented write. Michael
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