Bathing In the Dark

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bathing in the dark sploshing water over toes eager eyes watching the moons’ concentric circles the harbor’s invitation 8/27/2021

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/27/2021 11:07:00 PM

A lovely tanka Eavesdropping? Hugs.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/27/2021 3:49:00 PM

Love the contrast in the last lines. Great tanka, as always. :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2021 6:29:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/27/2021 12:54:00 PM

I still look seventeen....in the dark:) This is lovely, soothing, pampering -- simply refreshing. Love it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2021 1:55:00 PM

Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/27/2021 9:00:00 AM

And a glass of wine, bliss. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2021 12:02:00 PM

And a kiss too! ;)