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bathing in the dark sploshing water over toes eager eyes watching the moons’ concentric circles the harbor’s invitation 8/27/2021

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Date: 8/27/2021 11:07:00 PM
A lovely tanka Eavesdropping? Hugs.
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Date: 8/27/2021 3:49:00 PM
Love the contrast in the last lines. Great tanka, as always. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2021 6:29:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 8/27/2021 12:54:00 PM
I still look seventeen....in the dark:) This is lovely, soothing, pampering -- simply refreshing. Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2021 1:55:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/27/2021 9:00:00 AM
And a glass of wine, bliss. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2021 12:02:00 PM
And a kiss too! ;)

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