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Bathing In the Dark

bathing in the dark
sploshing water over toes
eager eyes watching
the moons’ concentric circles
the harbor’s invitation

8/27/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Buhagiar Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 11:07 PM
A lovely tanka Eavesdropping? Hugs.
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Love the contrast in the last lines. Great tanka, as always. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 6:29 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
DiMino Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 12:54 PM
I still look seventeen....in the dark:) This is lovely, soothing, pampering -- simply refreshing. Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 1:55 PM
Thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 9:00 AM
And a glass of wine, bliss. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 12:02 PM
And a kiss too! ;)
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