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Bat Doors

I sat outside the saloon on a bench
just watching the rain muddy the dirt street.
I was in for wet feet or a long wait.
I played my Jew’s Harp with a twanging beat. 

My horse waited across the muddy road
tethered in front of Slates Emporium’s Stores
where I’d bought a couple of choice cigars
before having that drink behind bat doors.
6-16-18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/19/2018 6:37:00 AM
Well done Alfred. I can see it :)
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Date: 6/17/2018 5:27:00 PM
So cowboy!! I really like this, Alfred.
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/17/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thanks,Andrea.

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