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Painting by Claude Monet

 

In memory of the tragic loss of life on July 14, 2016 Bastille day in Nice, France.

Bastille 2016

Bastille


Many years ago
They stormed the Bastille
Two hundred and one lost their lives
The tennis court oath however survived

Jacques had his heart with the masses
Necker could not be dismissed so easily
The storming of the Bastille was to be
The birth of a nation for all men free

And free men they were
Running naked through the streets
What they lacked in cake
The made up with in red wine

The Republique was born
A democracy in infancy
Would grow through trials and tribulations
To become a multicultural great nation

Lone angry men filled with such hate
I welcome you to Bastilles’ gate
Of medieval prisons long ago
It is there, you I shall throw

You kill in the name of a God
A God you do not know
Love has escaped from your very soul
Only hate tarnishes your bitter heart

The ghosts of Bastille are mocking
The coward who is filled with such animosity
There never shall be an escape
The soul of the dead shall eternally taunt you

A criminal with no compassion
You have only given us our determination
To battle for the peace of this great nation
You bring us tears; alas we shall turn them to wine

Naked through the streets we shall always dance!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 9:02 PM
A wonderful write that is deserving of POTD Arthur! Congratulations! 7 ; )
Bateman Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 9:21 AM
Arthur, A Great Choice for POTD!! Congratulations my good friend!! This is a magnificent write for sure. Best Always, Gary
Callus Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 6:06 AM
We are living in sad times. Despite everything freedom will survive. A very fitting poem, Arthur. Congrats on p.o.t.d. Regards // paul
Mohit Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 3:50 AM
Simply wonderful!
Vaso Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 9:11 PM
Thank you so much Ananya
Kent Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Absolutely amazing !!
Vaso Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Thank you for such kind words!!
Smith Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:07 PM
A great poem Arthur. No matter what we should still dance.
Smith Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:32 PM
lol....well after all the food and drink I had yesterday I cant think about naked until I hit the health club a few times
Vaso Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:08 PM
and naked, dont forget naked!!!
Runyan Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Very touching. Very proud. I love it. Thanks for sharing something so great!
Allison Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Delighted for you that your poem has been honoured with POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Congratulations on getting the poem of the day :-) Alexis
Shaw Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 11:31 AM
I read every word that was "Poignantly" penned . . . "Right" down to the "Very" end . . . "With" every "Pain" of this "History" felt . . . "Each" word "Compelling" & Correctly" spelt . . . "Viva" la "France" . . . "May" soon all "Feet" dance . . .
Andresen Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 7:31 AM
- CONGRATULATIONS !!!! -
Onclaud Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 5:22 AM
remarkable cry for freedom... such an astonishing write, arthur!.. huggs
Bateman Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 8:23 PM
Hello Arthur, An outstanding, poignant, and most meaningful write. Your verses are filled with such courage, strength, and conviction. Good shall triumph Evil!! Those who supposedly kill in the name of God, are themselves both Godless and eternally evil. A SEVEN/FAV!! Best Always, Gary
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 5:04 PM
Am making this a fave Arthur - I hope and pray one day we see peace in the world and an end to these atrocities:-( hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Thanks Jan so kind of you!
Nance Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:24 PM
This event breaks my heart... hugs
Vaso Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:40 PM
I hear you Cas, very sad when these things happens. Hugs
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Powerfully penned my friend my heart is heavy at yet another atrocity in France:-( hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Jan, so sad what happened!
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 10:10 AM
VEry strong reply to a most horrible guy! And all like him. I love this , Arthur.
Vaso Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Andrea!! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 7:45 AM
- Peace and love ...... great sadness for lost lives - No one has the right to kill "IN GOD'S NAME" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, much appreciated!
Quigley Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 6:44 AM
Very nice. The sort of determination all free people need!
Vaso Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 4:39 PM
Thanks Tom!!
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