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Basic Training, Survival of the Fittest

The humidity was doing a good job of keeping pace with the temperature. Until around 10 AM when the thermometer pushed its way past 100. That’s when 176 frightened kids and a few old hippies staggered out of the crowded cattle trucks. “Alright you maggots, RUN,” voices screamed from beneath wide brimmed Smokey Bear hats. So, we ran…and ran, duffle bags slung over our shoulders. Hours passed before we finally came to attention under the blistering Missouri sun. All the while, the bears circled. Sniffing the air and grunting. “Don’t show them any fear,” one of the old hippies whispered, “they pray on the weak.” Like nature intends Survival of the fittest Do not show weakness

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Date: 3/22/2024 4:06:00 PM
a well spun story of a not so wonderful camping experience. The Haiku afterwards underscored a skill necessary for survival in nature or when encountering dogs while walking through my neighborhood :-) I enjoyed this poem; it sparked memories of some of my summer camp days. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 3/21/2024 8:50:00 PM
I can just picture this one. Brings back some not-so-fond memories of my 'camper days.' ~ Gershon
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