Bashful Foliage

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bashful as dawn breaks It's about to start raining~ leaves sputter in joy

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2022 7:49:00 AM

Good one. Lovely snapshot of a fall scene. I believe I see some gingko trees and golden leaves on the ground. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/27/2022 6:30:00 PM

charming ~

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/27/2022 11:16:00 AM

A joyful Haiku that paints Autumn's glory, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Be blessed!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2022 8:55:00 AM

- A great description of an ordinary autumn day outside my window, Las ... ( the rain was pouring ... not for joy in my eyes :))) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 9/27/2022 8:52:00 AM

You have described the breaking of dawn using the apt image of a bashful maiden rising up. Beautiful haiku