Bashed

My once great life Has turned into a mound of ash. My once great life Was battered by the hurtful strife Resulting from your acts so rash. As crushed as is a cup of hash, My once great life. Theme: Ash one of three first places Contest: Alphabets of Rondelet

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 2/21/2012 7:24:00 AM

Congrats on your fabulous win Joyce, you've done extremely well with this form and the theme 'ash'. Love, gautami

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/20/2012 5:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Joyce. You did well in writing this rondelet which is not easy to write.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 2/20/2012 4:15:00 PM

Wonderful write and nice flow,Joyce.Congratulations on your 1st place win in Nette`s contest....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2012 4:04:00 PM

Joyce, a big congratulations to you. Love that title for it!!!

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/20/2012 1:49:00 PM

Joyce, this is a wonderful write. Congrats on winning Nette's contest................S.Ronthorpe

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/20/2012 12:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in ~Nette's~ "Alphabets Of Rondelet" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 2/20/2012 10:38:00 AM

Joyce ,Congratulations on your 1st place win in Nette's contest.It's a honour to share the 1st place with you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2012 9:34:00 AM

congrats Joyce on a huge first place win for this captivating poetry entry luv.. so glad u are doing well.. me too..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/20/2012 4:14:00 AM

so much substance in your compact, lyrical piece.. it sings, joyce and so the 1st prize goes to yuo... congrats on your win in my contest..:) huggs!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/15/2012 1:07:00 PM

I agree with Christopher just below.

Christopher Bunton

Date: 2/13/2012 3:34:00 PM

Very Good!