Joyce Johnson Poet Verse

Bashed

My once great life
Has turned into a mound of ash.
My once great life
Was battered by the hurtful strife
Resulting from your acts so rash.
As crushed as is a cup of hash,
My once great life.


Theme:  Ash

one of three first places

Contest:  Alphabets of Rondelet

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Gautami Phookan February 21, 2012 at 7:24 AM Congrats on your fabulous win Joyce, you've done extremely well with this form and the theme 'ash'. Love, gautami

Robert Pettit February 20, 2012 at 5:41 PM Congratulations on your win Joyce. You did well in writing this rondelet which is not easy to write.

Olusegun Arowolo February 20, 2012 at 4:15 PM Wonderful write and nice flow,Joyce.Congratulations on your 1st place win in Nette`s contest....

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2012 at 4:04 PM Joyce, a big congratulations to you. Love that title for it!!!

Samual Ronthorpe February 20, 2012 at 1:49 PM Joyce, this is a wonderful write. Congrats on winning Nette's contest................S.Ronthorpe

Carol Sunshine Brown February 20, 2012 at 12:05 PM Congratulations on your placement in ~Nette's~ "Alphabets Of Rondelet" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

Kash Poet February 20, 2012 at 10:38 AM Joyce ,Congratulations on your 1st place win in Nette's contest.It's a honour to share the 1st place with you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 20, 2012 at 9:34 AM congrats Joyce on a huge first place win for this captivating poetry entry luv.. so glad u are doing well.. me too..

Nette Onclaud February 20, 2012 at 4:14 AM so much substance in your compact, lyrical piece.. it sings, joyce and so the 1st prize goes to yuo... congrats on your win in my contest..:) huggs!

Robert Pettit February 15, 2012 at 1:07 PM I agree with Christopher just below.

Christopher Bunton February 13, 2012 at 3:34 PM Very Good!