Baseball

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baseball where everything is a statistic - but everything isn't a clean statistic.
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It didn’t work out. *sigh* What were the odds? Statistics... - love isn’t baseball. Where do regrets start? Should I regret the sunset - or mourn holding hands? Or shame desire? Baseball.. Well, at least he didn't get to first base. =]

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/3/2020 11:29:00 AM

Too many expect an home run without swinging .....Aloha! Rico

Anais Vionet
Date: 10/5/2020 1:55:00 PM

John Gondolf

Date: 10/3/2020 7:09:00 AM

Some relationships just aren't meant to be; at least he was thrown out before he got to first base. I like the baseball analogy, Anais. Have a good day. John

Anais Vionet
Date: 10/3/2020 7:36:00 AM

Thank you John. =]