Base

Deep rich abyss Enriching my deprived soul Surround me

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Harry Horsman

Date: 11/7/2011 4:23:00 PM

hey this is brilliant, Laura. harry

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/7/2011 3:23:00 PM

Bring on the BASS. the BASE or whatever you wanna call it...I call it THUNDER! and I lovve it!

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/7/2011 7:47:00 PM

On both bases, INDEED! :--)

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 11/5/2011 11:28:00 PM

You've stormed us with Haikus, I see. Would you be referring to an alchoholic drink by any chance?

J.W. Earnings

Date: 11/4/2011 8:30:00 PM

I love this poem, Laura, my great sis! Keep up the excellent words! (Your bro): David! ")

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2011 10:04:00 PM

I like this!!

Dan Kearley

Date: 11/3/2011 6:59:00 PM

You are just flowing with the Haiku's today.. They are all so very nice.. :-)

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/7/2011 7:48:00 PM

Thanks!! :---)