Bart Adventure

The rails always hiss and scream 
a steel Woman pierces the ear
drum. We all shake, bobbing and 
dancing no skill required you
all do it equally as good 
Doors open and close. People 
enter and leave. A metallic 
ant farm we all live in 
together, never ceasing always 
alive and kicking, some 
of us screaming our 
lungs out to unresponsive 
gods to unresponsive ear-
canals. We are like stale 
fish in a sardine pack, the 
last one on the far left, 
never bothered by any random 
fleshy hand. The steel snake 
oozes on through the black 
tunnels as we finally reach 
our blazing-light destination 
arriving, we climb up steel 
stairways that lead to another 
screaming circus. All peoples 
from all places thrive like 
a bee hive that a small 
child with a gigantic 
2X4 smacked, creating 
re-energized life. Humming 
and buzzing all together 
as one unit of blissful 
creation. We might all be 
moving to different places, 
that one thing unites 
us all, all in one fluid 
motion. Old bookstores, 
sanctuaries for people like 
us still open. 
He plucks away at a 
classical guitar, playing 
classical tunes which are 
recognizable, but the name 
always forgotten. Purchase 
tomes of poetry, old 
friends to be taken home 
and put with the rest. Ever 
increasing retirement home for the 
artistically mad. Hughes and 
Yeates are MINE, or 
am I theirs? Perhaps its 
a tango of verse, we lend 
a hand to each other. After 
much paying, and walking, 
sitting and sleeping, we 
return home. But what 
does that mean. Home?
Home is where I put 
my thoughts to paper, my 
poetry to pen. Mozart 
I am sure would get it 
follow what I say, applaud 
me with that silly laugh. 
For now I'll accept you 
stare with your accepting 
eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/3/2009 5:23:00 PM
i feel like I'm back on bart on my way to Berkley. Great analogies man. I love it.
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