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Barriers

Are there some people somewhat like you and I Who have been friends but whenever we meet Our talks goes haywire, our tongues get crappy And we sadly bring out the worst in each other? The blue clouds disappear, the warning bells ring And the heart puts a barrier between our souls Boldly we stop meeting and there is Loneliness, tears, and unanswered questions November 23, 2016 For Brian Strand Contest 241

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Date: 12/18/2016 7:59:00 PM
Maybe love is the reason why.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/19/2016 3:28:00 AM
I bet it is Pashang! Thanks for the visit and applause! Balveen
Date: 11/25/2016 4:33:00 AM
Ending super
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/25/2016 5:22:00 AM
Thanks Poet for finding the ending super! Balveen
Date: 11/23/2016 12:04:00 PM
Wonderful thought provoking poem.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/24/2016 7:05:00 PM
Christy, thanks for your loving words!

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