Barking of the Oak

This oak tree and me, we’re made of the same stuff.. Carl Sagan


why lean on my unmoving breast? breathe my rest... climb my milieu... hull me out an adventure. soar amidst the forest of my branches. i’ve squirmed as you shimmy up and scream to be rescued. i’ve dreaded the hearted-blade score and singe in my bark. you’ve left your bloody initials, therefore, you’ve enslaved yourSELF TO ME in thorns and lichens. i wonder when you kiss off this puppy love will you restore my health or leave the scars of the past? i wait eternally for your return with roots sopping tears of regret. perhaps your progeny approaches - the wind whispers such vespers to me. i ache ancient rings of arthritis... crows nibble nebulously i fear... in the end’s gratitude for sultry sun and merciful cups of rain. goodbye my dear. . . the lightning strikes 12/28/2019 I am a tree poetry contest Sponsor: Delilah Ventura

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Date: 1/1/2020 3:55:00 PM
Very descriptive and creative take on the contest! Another "wow!" from me!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/3/2020 4:15:00 PM
Thank you, Juliet! <3 Kim
Date: 12/28/2019 7:57:00 PM
Wow! Your poem is surely a real 'treet,' Kim! G.L. in the contest! Peace and Joy, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend!
Date: 12/28/2019 12:23:00 PM
Very original, Kim, with some remarkable descriptive lines. Ilike "hull me out / an adventure. As for my poem on the villanelle, I don't write them any longer, to time consuming for a form that says little if anything substantial like popovers, mostly air, not much to sink one's teeth into. Thanks for the stop by. / M
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2019 6:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maurice!
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