Baring It All

The words I write
bare my soul
My thoughts take flight
My mind unfolds

I have no fear of being judged
No worries of how you take my words,
reputation being smudged
I feel as free as a bird

The rush is worth way more than gold
The feeling of freedom rushes in
It's like stepping out of my clothes
The cool air on my bare skin

Naked is the word that comes to mind
Goose bumps rise upon my skin
Of modesty there is no sign
Oh yeah she's naked again!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 10:32 AM
well deserved win, nikki...congrats with huggs
Reynolds Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Thanks
Roper Avatar
November 17, 2016 at 10:13 AM
NIKKi, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Reynolds Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Thanks!
La France Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Nikki congratulations on your win in the contest. I really like your poem ~
Reynolds Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Thanks!!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Congrats, Nikki!
Reynolds Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:13 PM
Thank you!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:23 AM
Ha ha, cute. Congrats.
Reynolds Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:13 PM
:)
Stover Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 12:24 PM
I love this poem. It's obvious you have the spirit of a true poet.
Reynolds Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Thank you. It's great getting feedback from other writers. I really appreciate it and thank you for the compliment!
Stebbings Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 8:05 AM
Poetry is very revealing, underlying feelings show through. I find it satisfying to be able to write in a style not available in prose or speech and I enjoy trying the many different forms.
Reynolds Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 10:35 PM
Most of my poems are very personal and contain my most inner thoughts.
White Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 12:03 AM
Writing poetry is very much that for me. I show myself, naked and vulnerable, to everyone who wants to see me. I write for myself, even when I enter contests. Still, having people comment, is a warm shower too :)
White Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Coming back to you with congratulations!!! Wonderful :)
Reynolds Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 10:34 PM
Thank you and good luck to you!
White Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 12:04 AM
I entered the contest too. Good luck to you!
Turner Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 9:17 AM
That is exactly what writers/poets do. They bare their soul. Some sort of cleansing I believe. Love your poem, Nikki. You grabbed my attention with a catchy title:)
Reynolds Avatar
November 13, 2016 at 5:39 PM
Thank you. I wrote it for a contest on here. The theme was "naked". LOL
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