Nette Onclaud Poet Limerick

Barewalking Shoes

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my flowered sandals walked everywhere
from beaches to malls they swayed like air
   my toes ripped the strap...
   landed on a man’ s lap...
who winked, “let’s have wine and footsies fare!”


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(( for SKAT'S " SHOES" Contest ))

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Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 7:15 AM oh, how cute, how did I ever miss reading a limerick of yours? Love that title on it too, Nette!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 7, 2011 at 1:04 PM HaHaHaHa.. what a riot of a Limerick Nette my friend.. a grand visual here luv.. with great lines of fun and humor ..good luck... no..Ron is sulking today .. he was rooting for Pittsburgh but they lost... he is in 'bear mode' today..hahah..going to let him read your Limerick here..haha..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire February 7, 2011 at 11:03 AM Oh, that's so cute, Nette! Wishing you success in the contest. Thanks for making me smile. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts February 7, 2011 at 8:52 AM ooh hoo, you little flirt, best of luck in the contest with this cute poem

Robert Pettit February 7, 2011 at 8:06 AM Cut little limerick that should garner some consideration in the contest.

Carol Fillmore February 7, 2011 at 7:17 AM Ah this is great, Nette;)) Good luck in the contest!

Tahera Mannan February 7, 2011 at 6:30 AM hahaha Really cool Nette. All the very best.

Nette Onclaud February 7, 2011 at 6:18 AM yipes! this really happened abroad., thst french guy!! .. :)

Jay Del Fierro February 7, 2011 at 3:55 AM he must've had a foot fetish,or would like to toe wrestle on a salad dish...you're quite the character :))...peace , jay