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Barely Older Than Innocence

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In my most endearing reveries, I journey once more where monoliths of stone rose from the rocky shore reminiscing the joyful days we spent along the quay as sunrise painted pastel hues over waves in the bay We gazed at the blush on the horizon, both enchanted It was though Chablis and rose' were being decanted generously poured into the sea in front of our eyes as dawn was birthed in morning's Eastern skies Barely older than innocence, on love's fragile verge Emotions were undisguised as passion began to surge Hesitant touches, clumsy kisses, awakened fascination That summer was so much more than a mere flirtation Haunted by the memories of the towering Cornwall cliffs my heart will always wonder about those "what ifs" What if we'd not parted. What if we'd let love prevail Magic and mystery linger, much like an Arthurian tale Amazing days we shared, leaving footprints on the coast But it wasn't just geography that held me so engrossed but the beauty of a woman and the spell on me she wove in our romantic morning trysts, along that sandy Cove

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Date: 5/2/2018 1:11:00 PM
Wow, Lin, I really enjoyed reading this, it took me back to the summer of '66...my summer of "what ifs." Nicely done. John
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/5/2018 10:30:00 AM
You are a very kind gentleman, John...thank you.
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John Gondolf
Date: 5/2/2018 3:25:00 PM
Lin, I still read you because I think you are an incredible writer. As long as you keep writing I will keep reading. John
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/2/2018 3:15:00 PM
With sincere thanks, John. I appreciate that you still read me.
Date: 4/30/2018 10:23:00 AM
Cliffs and what ifs...memories abound...nice pic too...great read Lin...hope all is well...stay in the light...^WW^
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/30/2018 5:48:00 PM
All is well with me. Thanks for asking and for liking this one. You are still my warrior hero.
Date: 4/30/2018 9:20:00 AM
what a beautiful but sad love story Lin, the imagery is so vivid, I think we all have those 'what if' moments in our life :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/30/2018 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. In my case the what ifs were answered, but there always seems to be more forthcoming. Second guessing harms the heart.

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