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Prominence walking barefoot Check out the chaos below The soundless roar of foam and smoke The banshee howls at the rising tide Dragged and swept away The wind chafes. Tortured through a slap It is ghostly and eerie in her hair She must tiptoe over cliffs.
Written: January 15, 2023

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Date: 1/16/2023 2:45:00 PM
Liking that metaphoric slant, Lasaad, leans heavily in thoughts, my friend, Aloha William
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Date: 1/16/2023 2:35:00 AM
Great imagery even if sometimes dark.
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Date: 1/15/2023 3:34:00 PM
Lovely descriptions Lasaad of that undercurrent goings on. Well written my friend.
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