Barefoot In the Grass

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Barefoot In The Grass Stemmed short blades plays the weight of me, trimmed long swords wedge toes in keen delight. 2019 May 05 *3rd Place* NA the day away ~~Lu Loo *4th Place* Writing Challenge 4, May 2019, No Placement Constance La France

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/7/2019 2:31:00 AM

how sweet and I love the pic! Sometimes I wish we could see pictures as we judge. Great ku dear William. Thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/7/2019 3:14:00 AM

You are honest, as I recalled judging Winged Warrior based on words alone, then seeing video afterward and then a commentary to that effect, irrespective of its implication in its conclusion, I viewed it after placements were entered. Thanks for the honors--Cheers indeed!

Constance La France

Date: 6/2/2019 11:47:00 AM

William, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write ~

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/2/2019 11:53:00 AM

Thanks Constance for the placement, and I am up to bat once again come win or lose, a heads-up in thankfulness, Aloha William

Eve Roper

Date: 5/31/2019 4:30:00 PM

A beautiful sweet verse, William, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/31/2019 4:43:00 PM

It was able to squeeze on this, surprised a bit that Constance took a slight breath on the rules, nonetheless appreciative for sure as 'twas an N/A twice, --different taste eh? Thanks a bundle Eve, Aloha William