Barefoot

Barefoot

Off to school and then go barefoot,
in the 50s running wild,
Elvis was singing blue suede shoes,
Used to listen all the time.

Bare foot out a playing football,
kicking, stinging poor old foot.
Bindi’s, Goatheads , sometimes stinging,
Ignore the pain an counter, boot.

Bare foot rolling in the black mud.
Parents couldn’t tell to call ,
were we black or whiter  kids. 
Mud covered as it did,
mud covered us all.


Francines' Barefoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Edwards Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Great poem Don hun congrats on your HM xxx Tracie
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 7:41 PM
I just loved the meaning behind those last two lines, Don. Congrats on the HM,my friend.
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Accept my congratulations on the win in the contest of Francine, Don
Taylor Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Congrats on your HM, Don. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 11:18 AM
Congrats DON on your grand win with this great entry and write luv.. enjoy speical honor just for u...wow..
Long Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 11:01 AM
congrats on your in in the contest. cory
Brown Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Barefoot"contest Don. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 10:37 AM
congrats on your HM in the contest Don with this lovely reminiscence
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 10:12 PM
this is very fun to read. I loved the references to things from 50's. I think you must have been running all over the place,like I was too!!
Johnson Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 11:10 PM
Yes Andrea, Back when life was less complicated, everything seemed to work, Yes we made our own fun, Tom Mix at the pictures , fighting bad guys and mc gurk. Different world then... xo Don
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 3:23 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..I like your way of thinking that my work about the mirage should be a Ballard that one could sing..Thanks for stopping by....Sara
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June 5, 2011 at 2:50 PM
The best of luck here in this foot of a walk entry.. Nice job,,, i'm also sending soup mail.... p.d.
Dailey Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 5:31 AM
Good luck in the contest. My mother always said it looked like we kids belonged to the blackfoot indian tribe. Mike
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