Bare Weeping Willows

Bare Weeping Willows Graceful exposed limbs drip tears Lake filled to its brim Eerily fog coats isle's trees Who sigh for birds southward flown
Sponsor: Nathan_______~~D Contest: Tanka(season)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 5:01 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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October 24, 2012 at 3:19 PM
Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 3:16 PM
WOW, big congrats to you on this stunning win, my friend. GREAT imagery!!
Johnson Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations on your big win with this inspired piece. Love, Joyce
Ryerson Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 10:42 AM
Wow, Sarah!...What a beauty this is!...second line 'limbs drip tears' is exquisite...Congratulations...well deserved win - Tim
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Sara. Love, Carol
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October 24, 2012 at 5:29 AM
Wow! Yes, perfect lines, indeed! This tanka is just wonderful! Very special congratulations for a very special first winner, Sara! (^_^) Love, Hanitra!
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October 24, 2012 at 4:46 AM
Congratulations on your win Sara, a worthy win here sweetheart xx
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October 23, 2012 at 11:51 PM
CONGRATS SARA ON AN EXCITING FIRST PLACE WIN LUV .. PERFECT LINES
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October 23, 2012 at 6:47 PM
SARA, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD
Richards Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 6:46 PM
A lovely and melancholy poem, Sara! Congratulations on a fine write!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 1:09 AM
I really like the feeling of weeping and falling water that this one portrays.
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October 11, 2012 at 2:32 PM
Wow, Sara, you have created a masterful write here my friend! I really enjoyed every line and every piece of this delightful poem! This is a powerfully worded write, full of ideas of the Fall and everything that is included therein! I loved this piece, Great Work!!
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