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Bare-Boned

There's something about the air in Fall, it begets this chill inside that longs to snuggle up with my pen Summer is veering left and I imagine myself rooted to the scenery, a weeping willow who sheds her sins with a quick shake of the wind- lest I peer down to find my own foliage has settled with time, think of all those secrets left unturned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/18/2011 9:59:00 AM
yes there is something about fall, its that chill in the air, dying leaves. this was a great piece of poetry.
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Melissa. Love Carol
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Melissa. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:27:00 PM
Enjoyed this creative write, fall will soon arrive you make it sound so inviting.
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:15:00 PM
Nice words you wrote with your pen, the snuggling time sounds nice. Enjoy your self,..p.d.
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:14:00 PM
I especially like the last two lines.. In the Autumn of our lives we do face that problem..Enjoyed reading your work and the way you put the idea together..Sara
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