Barbwire

We had started preparing dinner,
but when I told her they were grazing out back,
she wanted to go see them for herself.   I folded the dishtowel
and put dinner on hold.
           I suggested we take scraps
           Lettuce leaves, carrot tops, apple cores, …scraps from the counter

The three horses were clustered under the trees,
munching tall grass, not far from the house
Only barbwire, the swing set, and their indifference between us

We tossed pieces of lettuce over the fence, and called out their names
At first they pretended not to notice us, 
but finally one pony swished his tail, and slowly, sidled closer

My grandchild held out the apple, with a hesitant hand
At first she was afraid, of losing a finger perhaps,
or her quivering thumb

But, I told her to flatten her palm, hold the apple like a gift
The pony devoured the apple, and continued to nuzzle her hand

Barbwire is no restraint…. And love has no constraints 
Sometimes amounting to nothing more than
            an open heart, and open hand and an apple core
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Rodrigues Avatar
September 30, 2024 at 6:14 AM
LOL! So true :)
Moribund Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 10:15 AM
Hi Carrie: Love this poem. When it comes down to it, nothing is better then walking around in your bare feet. Peace: Sheol
Reynolds Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 5:00 PM
Amen to that, sister! Same here! I even ditched my heals at my wedding and did it barefoot. :) Ya gotta love bare toes! Love Kristin
Brazell Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 4:52 PM
boy o boy all those shoes. this is an awesome poem!!!!!! continue to use the gifts god has given you and be blessed!!!!!! jordan
Buys Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 4:02 PM
Made me smile, this is very cleverly done. Regards Heidie
Foulk Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 3:31 PM
my daugter has enough shoes to fill a shoe store and then some. this was a great poem enjoyed and it brought a smile. thank you for reading an angel fell from the sky and for your comment on it.
Jordan Avatar
August 5, 2008 at 3:01 PM
Carrie - sounds like my wife and daughter can't keep a pair of shoes on them - I'm the opposite I never go barefoot - God Bless and thank you for your comments and support Carrie
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