Barbers Shop Sonnet

Don't tell me men don't care about their hair
They care about it even more than girls
As soon as they were open they were there
All queueing round the block with all their curls

Tucked up inside their beanie hats. 'Short back
And sides perhaps, or how about a fade
Or maybe just a trim today?' And whack
A bit of gel on, or a nice pomade

And it is done. He springs up from the chair
And brushes off the hair and pays the bill
(With tip of course), and out into the air
As fresh as baby's breath and dressed to kill

Don't tell me men don't care - I saw the way
They bounced out of the barbers shop today

© Gail Foster 12th April 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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April 12, 2021 at 11:25 AM
For many, it is a vanishing asset so their joy is short-lived! Aloha! Rico
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