Bar of the Foul

Inky Smoke twirls and dance 
Its smoky Polka amid a sea 
of horror shows all projecting 
their shadows upon one and all.
Amongst grinning goblin junkies 
Amongst grinning toothless fairies 
downing drinks of dead desire 
the smoke is not the only 
thing to creep in
the stench of new attendees 
enter the frying pan through 
the fire.
Suddenly there is an uproar 
A hag's scream pierces the smoke 
a ghoul chokes on a bone 
the reminder of something even 
more sinister then themselves 
has appeared. Through the 
suffocated windows of ash 
comes the radiant light of a 
new dawn. Reminding them 
all of their lives, of the next 
day to come.
They pack it up, all shuffling 
back to reality as the cock chimes 
Nine
Echoing upon the cool breeze 
lifting out smoke and stuffiness 

Exposed is the blood stained 
floor, wood and decayed 
a victim of alcohol spills 
and termites. The Black Rats 
scatter over cannibalized 
carcasses, trying to find their 
dens again.

The bar tender a troll of 
ignorant repute, grinds his 
oily teeth as his apron 
drips with the screams of 
goats and children 

He scrubs down the floor 
the tables 
the Bar
the Alter 
Gone is any evidence of the 
night before 
except I suppose the stench 
that can never be done away 
with 
A constant reminder of the 
Night
only faded from memory 
It will return 
It has to 
As the cockroaches file 
back in as they always do
to the dance of smoke

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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