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Bar-room Gloom -- lol

They all raised their glasses with somber hearts At virtual bars continents apart -- To their 'dearest old friend' His mug had met its end -- The target of the sharp points of their darts

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Date: 4/24/2020 11:08:00 PM
I am smiling thinking of wakes I have attended. The more drinks the more darts.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/25/2020 9:31:00 PM
Ha, ha. At wakes?! No kidding?! -- Guess not. Whoa! (Never been to a wake... Too sleepy to attend). Ta, ta! ~ Gershon
Date: 4/24/2020 7:30:00 PM
G'day Gershon … those darts can do much damage in public bars, especially close to closing time when more than one target seems to be the case, however in your limerick the darts can be hurtful words indeed but just as painful - Lindsay
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Date: 4/25/2020 9:29:00 PM
Interesting angle, my friend. Hadn't thought of it. Thanks, Lindsay. Cheers, Gershon
Date: 4/23/2020 11:56:00 AM
Yes the world adores virtual. How utterly sad, Gershon! We have been living in a virtual world years before this. Totally inhuman! We are a lost people. Just keyboards to one another and slaves to a government, Panagiota xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2020 2:42:00 PM
… Yes, you're so right... And here WE are keyboarding back and forth to one another... If you can't beat 'em, join 'em, as they say. As one-dimensional as keyboarding may be, it's better than no communication at all, I suppose. :) Gershon
Date: 4/23/2020 7:37:00 AM
Virtual anything is the future trend great poem Gershon please ignore last comment i do apologize blessings Jennifer
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2020 2:39:00 PM
Yes, virtual reality is here, and here to stay. Thanks, Jennifer. :) gw
Date: 4/23/2020 1:19:00 AM
lol.. wow.. Virtual bars..Wonderful Limerick.. I loved the way you composed it..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2020 2:39:00 PM
I'll take the love, virtually anyway... lol... Thank you... Take good care. ~ Gershon
Date: 4/22/2020 11:16:00 PM
Gershon, Well they can't miss with 'The target of the sharp points of their darts'. -Richard
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Date: 4/23/2020 2:37:00 PM
That dear friend's mug didn't stand a chance. lol. Thanks, Richard.