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Snowflakes fall, spinning, swirling twirling, whirling. A flurry of ballet dancers in gauzy white dresses. _______________________ March 23, 2023 Poetry/Bantu Copyright Protected, ID 03-1533-953-23 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bantus sponsor, Suzanne Delaney, Judged 04/06/2023 Second Place

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Date: 4/8/2023 9:44:00 AM
I can see the performance through your eyes Constance. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/8/2023 11:58:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, I actually thought of this watching snowflakes falling as I was looking out the window !
Date: 4/8/2023 9:22:00 AM
yours was so pretty. Congrats
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Date: 4/8/2023 11:59:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats, I like it too !
Date: 4/8/2023 4:39:00 AM
Lovely and delicate. Congratulations on your win, Constance :)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/8/2023 11:59:00 PM
Suzette, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !
Date: 4/6/2023 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance on your placement. You did a pretty one:)
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2023 8:44:00 PM
Daniel, thank you so much fir the compliment and congratulations !
Date: 3/27/2023 4:39:00 PM
For sure a bantu metaphor. Lovely, Dear Heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2023 12:33:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much for the comment and compliment !
Date: 3/26/2023 6:28:00 PM
An excellent Bantu Constance, snowflakes and ballet dancers are jointly and gracefully in tune together… Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 3/27/2023 8:30:00 AM
Belle, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings
Date: 3/26/2023 4:52:00 AM
Conplementing each other so beauteously
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2023 10:54:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/25/2023 8:43:00 PM
How lovely. :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2023 10:54:00 AM
Fin, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/25/2023 6:27:00 PM
What a lovely picture you paint here, so elegant..
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Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2023 10:55:00 AM
Nancy, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance

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