Constance La France Poet Free verse

Bantu

 

Snowflakes fall, spinning, swirling twirling, whirling.

A flurry of ballet dancers in gauzy white dresses. 

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March 23, 2023


Poetry/Bantu
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1533-953-23
All Rights Reserved,  2023, Constance La France 


Written for the Standard contest, Bantus
sponsor, Suzanne Delaney, Judged 04/06/2023

Second Place

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Linda Alice Fowler April 8, 2023 at 9:44 AM I can see the performance through your eyes Constance. Congratulations on your win! :) Constance La France April 8, 2023 at 11:58 PM Linda, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, I actually thought of this watching snowflakes falling as I was looking out the window !

Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2023 at 9:22 AM yours was so pretty. Congrats Constance La France April 8, 2023 at 11:59 PM Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats, I like it too !

Suzette Richards April 8, 2023 at 4:39 AM Lovely and delicate. Congratulations on your win, Constance :) Constance La France April 8, 2023 at 11:59 PM Suzette, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations !

Daniel Turner April 6, 2023 at 2:58 PM Congratulations, Constance on your placement. You did a pretty one:) Constance La France April 6, 2023 at 8:44 PM Daniel, thank you so much fir the compliment and congratulations !

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2023 at 4:39 PM For sure a bantu metaphor. Lovely, Dear Heart. Constance La France March 28, 2023 at 12:33 PM Andrea, thank you so much for the comment and compliment !

Beryl Edmonds March 26, 2023 at 6:28 PM An excellent Bantu Constance, snowflakes and ballet dancers are jointly and gracefully in tune together… Belle Constance La France March 27, 2023 at 8:30 AM Belle, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings

Unseeking Seeker March 26, 2023 at 4:52 AM Conplementing each other so beauteously Constance La France March 26, 2023 at 10:54 AM Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance

Fin Chuuk March 25, 2023 at 8:43 PM How lovely. :) Constance La France March 26, 2023 at 10:54 AM Fin, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance

Nancy Kaufman March 25, 2023 at 6:27 PM What a lovely picture you paint here, so elegant.. Constance La France March 26, 2023 at 10:55 AM Nancy, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings, Constance