Bantu

From dawn to dusk, a changing sky,
 A gecko finds another hue

 3-22-2023
 Write Bantus Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Suzanne Delaney

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Eve Roper

August 17, 2023 at 8:38 PM

Cute, I see the geckos here and they are chirpy.

Linda Alice Fowler

April 8, 2023 at 9:46 AM

I love this one Joseph. Congratulations on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 8, 2023 at 9:26 AM

love this, Joe. Congrats

Suzette Richards

April 8, 2023 at 4:48 AM

We have a specie of gecko here that is almost transparent, it is that pale. Congratulations on your win, Joseph.

Daniel Turner

April 6, 2023 at 3:02 PM

Congratulations Joseph on your placement. I really liked this one:)

Valsa George

March 30, 2023 at 8:53 PM

Excellent, Joseph. Quite beautiful too. All the Best dear friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 30, 2023 at 6:55 AM

- Great one, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

March 28, 2023 at 12:27 PM

I love this chameleonic write Joseph. Great bantu. Best wishes in the contest. :)

Susan Ashley

March 25, 2023 at 11:44 AM

Dear Joseph, the vivid imagery of each line contrasts and relates so beautifully to create a dynamic poetic picture. Brilliant, my friend. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Jack Horne

March 25, 2023 at 9:02 AM

i really like where you've gone with this one

Andrea Dietrich

March 24, 2023 at 11:57 AM

Cool bantu!

Daniel Turner

March 23, 2023 at 6:44 PM

A bunch of 'em I'm thinkin'. This is a colorful one, Joseph. Not hard to picture for sure. I love it:)

Victor Buhagiar

March 23, 2023 at 10:59 AM

So true, Things change color throughout the day.

Joanna Daniel

March 23, 2023 at 1:24 AM

Wow! Brilliant, Joseph! Is this for Bantu contest?

Joseph May

March 23, 2023 at 4:44 AM

Thank you Joanna, Yes it is

Brandy Nicole

March 22, 2023 at 5:52 PM

"A gecko finds another hue." I like this line. So many beautiful colors, indeed. The colors in the sky are breathtaking. So poetic. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May

March 23, 2023 at 4:43 AM

Thank you for your kind words Brandy, Hugs

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