Bantu

From dawn to dusk, a changing sky, A gecko finds another hue 3-22-2023 Write Bantus Poetry Contest Sponsor: Suzanne Delaney

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Eve Roper

Date: 8/17/2023 8:38:00 PM

Cute, I see the geckos here and they are chirpy.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/8/2023 9:46:00 AM

I love this one Joseph. Congratulations on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2023 9:26:00 AM

love this, Joe. Congrats

Suzette Richards

Date: 4/8/2023 4:48:00 AM

We have a specie of gecko here that is almost transparent, it is that pale. Congratulations on your win, Joseph.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/6/2023 3:02:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph on your placement. I really liked this one:)

Valsa George

Date: 3/30/2023 8:53:00 PM

Excellent, Joseph. Quite beautiful too. All the Best dear friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/30/2023 6:55:00 AM

- Great one, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/28/2023 12:27:00 PM

I love this chameleonic write Joseph. Great bantu. Best wishes in the contest. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/25/2023 11:44:00 AM

Dear Joseph, the vivid imagery of each line contrasts and relates so beautifully to create a dynamic poetic picture. Brilliant, my friend. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Jack Horne

Date: 3/25/2023 9:02:00 AM

i really like where you've gone with this one

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2023 11:57:00 AM

Cool bantu!

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/23/2023 6:44:00 PM

A bunch of 'em I'm thinkin'. This is a colorful one, Joseph. Not hard to picture for sure. I love it:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/23/2023 10:59:00 AM

So true, Things change color throughout the day.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/23/2023 1:24:00 AM

Wow! Brilliant, Joseph! Is this for Bantu contest?

Joseph May
Date: 3/23/2023 4:44:00 AM

Thank you Joanna, Yes it is

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/22/2023 5:52:00 PM

"A gecko finds another hue." I like this line. So many beautiful colors, indeed. The colors in the sky are breathtaking. So poetic. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 3/23/2023 4:43:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words Brandy, Hugs